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17A Parts 2 + 3

Yaaaaaaaaay, I'm still updating. Part 2 wasn't very long, so I wanted to do part 3 at the same time to make up for it.

Linking from Part 1 since it's been a while: 17A so far

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niee87
Apr. 7th, 2015 03:38 am (UTC)
Squeeeee on seeing an update!

D: on all of it!
mzyra
Apr. 7th, 2015 06:36 pm (UTC)
Caaaaaseeeey :D

Sorry :P It should get a bit better... after the next chapter? And Kirk and Nancy isn't entirely D:!
niee87
Apr. 8th, 2015 03:14 am (UTC)
Jesssssss <3! Glad to see you around a little more again :D

Haha, okay! That's true, at least Kirk has a little happiness.
mzyra
Apr. 8th, 2015 09:32 pm (UTC)
Yeah, I've missed people around here :( I wish more people lived around England so that I could actually hang out with them <3
niee87
Apr. 9th, 2015 10:28 pm (UTC)
Seriously! Are you on facebook/friends with any of the crew/part of the facebook group?
mzyra
Apr. 11th, 2015 11:02 am (UTC)
Yeah, I am, but I never have much to say.
But I do worry about drifting from people because EVENTUALLY I'm going to get into my house and know how much spare money I have after it's furnished and EVENTUALLY I'm going to go on holidays again and then I imagine going to be able to meet people, but I worry that by the time it happens I'll have drifted so much that nobody will care anymore :(
katrisims
Apr. 7th, 2015 07:22 pm (UTC)
Yaaaayyy updates! ^^ It makes me wish I was updating, too. *decides to try and write yet a third slide today*

[Spoiler (click to open)]
Poor Kirk. Being between Tia and Tori must not be/have been pleasant. And if it's not really even better now... I have to say I'm kind of on Tia's side here, Tori's approach feels kind of high and mighty to me. "I'm going to stay unconscious the longest, which helps nothing, but it still makes me a better person than the rest of you." Again, poor, poor Kirk.

But at least Kirk and Nancy are cute together? <3

Ah, now that old prompt makes an appearance. :)

Again, poor, poor Dalton. I don't think I can even imagine what he's going through. And Diana. She seems so sweet, despite being Hideki's daughter. (Maybe that's why he dislikes her...) And the lies he's filling her head with, about herself and everything... Poor girl.

"You might meet another soon." Now I'm chilled by the thought of what that might mean...

Oh Dalton. He is (was?) even able to gather sympathy for Hideki, despite having seen the horrors he's capable of. Maybe that's just naiveté, but I want to squeeze him for being the incredibly sweet person he is. I hope he's still that person when all this is over...

I wonder why Hideki is being so honest with Dalton. (That's pretty chilling too.) I suppose he doesn't expect being caught or Dalton getting away or anything, but still.

Poor, poor, poor Dalton. I just hope someone figures out something that works and soon!


Another impressive update, Jess. Keep up the great work! :)
mzyra
Apr. 7th, 2015 09:30 pm (UTC)
*Prods* Dooooo iiiiit, wriiiite mooooore :P

[Spoiler (click to open)]
I feel like I need to defend Tori here a moment: Tori was never actually a part of any of the arguments, as Tori hasn't woken up even once since the quads were first knocked out. It's mostly been Carol arguing on Tori's behalf about Tori's presumed motives, which are not entirely accurate, but fit what Carol (and Irene) want them to be (and what Tori would probably claim they were if she were conscious).

Actually, and I don't know if I'll maybe try to write a part for Tori to establish this, but really a lot of the reason why Tori is holding out more than Kirk is due to guilt that her siblings don't share. Because, although she's kind of in denial about it, Tori has bullied Madeline pretty relentlessly their entire lives. And now that she knows Hideki has Madeline (the aliens told the quads whilst they were unconscious), Tori's really scared of the possibility that Madeline might die believing that Tori hates her, or even if she's just tortured, that she might believe that Tori would be happy about it. Tori NEEDS to see Madeline again and put things right, and if that requires her losing a chunk of her life, she deserves it. And if she doesn't get that chance... she deserves it all the more. So yeah, not so high and mighty, whatever Carol might choose to believe about her hero(/love).

Cuuuuuute :3 Gen 6 will be starting soon :P

Hideki was playing up his dislike of Diana for effect, but he could still kill her if needs be. Sucks to be Hideki's kids :(

Hee, Dalton's a sweetheart who needs all the hugs. He's not cut out for this, but then if he was he might have been able to start torturing people by now... D:

What's Dalton going to be able to do with Hideki's honesty? Tell Hideki's daughters? They probably wouldn't believe him over their Dad and would turn against him. If they did believe him and turned against Hideki, that would probably just put them all in danger...


Thaaaaank yoooooou <3 ^_^
katrisims
Apr. 8th, 2015 04:27 am (UTC)
*runs by quickly before work*

Oh, I did, I wrote a whole four slides yesterday! *proud*

[Spoiler (click to open)]
Oh. Right. I didn't think of it that way, and now I suddenly feel much more sorry for Tori than I did previously. I'm sorry Tori, I misjudged you. *pat pat* I suppose I shouldn't believe the intentions that are conveyed by Carol and Irene.

Oh, and it would totally be interesting to read Tori's point of view on this if you decide to write it. :)


*runs off to work*
mzyra
Apr. 8th, 2015 08:22 pm (UTC)
Oooooh, good job. Writing around work is hard.

Well, to be fair, nothing in the story had clearly conveyed who was saying what, but it's just attributed to Tori by characters, so. So it's hardly your fault!
scribal_goddess
Apr. 7th, 2015 10:32 pm (UTC)
*Saves update for day I don't have to fetch my brother from college*
mzyra
Apr. 8th, 2015 08:19 pm (UTC)
*Arranges hugs in preparation* :P
amylu1988
Apr. 16th, 2015 05:36 pm (UTC)
:O I can't believe how behind I was! I may have stayed up a little bit late last night catching up on 16C and 17A heehee. Well worth it.

*tries to find a word that conveys yay at Rymans but omg for plot* Epic stuff, Jess. Seriously, it's brilliant and scary and so well shot and well written...and this is more than one word, but you know what I mean. I am so happy to see Rymans, but just want to hug them all.

Come on Dalton, be our hero! *hugs again*
mzyra
Apr. 17th, 2015 09:57 am (UTC)
Aaaaaammmmmmmyyyyyy! :D <3 I thought you might have left the community or something ;~; Glad you haven't entirely!

Thank you so much! ^.^ It is a lot of work getting done and it feels like a bit of a drag when I start, but then sometimes when it's done I appreciate it for it the pictures and everything *.*

*\o/* Dalton!
amylu1988
Apr. 17th, 2015 12:06 pm (UTC)
*hugs loads* I knooooow. The silly thing is, although a lot happened in RL and I changed jobs and stuff...I also switched to firefox and forgot my LJ tab. So while I have been busy, I'm also just a bit useless. :)

One of the things on my to-do list tonight is to bring my poor neglected LJ up to date! I think it's been almost a year since I last posted.

The pictures and the story, it's all wonderful. I keep wanting to say how nice it was to read, but then I immediately feel bad for the characters! :) But yeah, it's a great story.

*Starts cheerleading squad for Dalton* *\o/* :D

Also, meant to mention, wow Diana is pretty. Despite scary plot, there's so many cute couples this generation!
scribal_goddess
May. 21st, 2015 04:27 pm (UTC)
Yikes, Tia! (I mean, that was totally a good idea, getting away from Simfeild, but at the same time... not far enough away, I think.)

Also, interviews. So many interviews. I feel for Tia. :)

All the kids are scattering and it's so saaaaad. D':

... why do I feel like Diana and Dalton are being set up? Or watched. Watched at the very least. (Because they are, duh.)

Hideki gets scarier by the day.
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